After realising the original plan for my poster was far too ambitious, I decided to completely re-do the poster. I have used a simple newspaper front cover, styled poster, using my local newspapers logo it will be easily identified by the community as the corporate identity of the Pinner Bugle. a simple bold text will be used for "The newspaper for pinner" symbolising a newspaper headline but being short and sweet to quickly and effectively grab peoples attention. At the bottom is a strap with the newspaper coming out of it to show the product on the poster linking the two products together to reinforce the corporate identity.
Please rewrite this with better grammar e.g. 'too' is the word you need in the first line. The picture looks like a grave at the moment.
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